Thursday, May 19, 2011

How could I improve on my blog?

2 comments:

  1. I would improve your grammar or punctuation but becides that i thought your blog was AWESOME!

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  2. I would add a little more body to your post. You have a ton of information you just need to add more voice and that may add volume to your post. I can tell you did a ton of research though.

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